the hawk and the boy.

We are learning to write a story with a beginning, middle and end. 

What happened to this lego man?

Who is he?

How did he get here? 

Who put him there? 

What is he doing here? 

How might he get out?
Beginning 
It was a quiet night and Josh wondered why is it  so quiet but then  he fell into a deep sleep and had a dream and it started like this   one day there was a man called Josh and he went to get some eggs from a nest then one day he went to get more eggs for his family dinner. He was like the rest of his family but there was only one thing that wasn’t the same. He was an inventor and he made a shrink ray and when he came  back from catching eggs he saw his shrink ray out side and he thought to himself maybe my family put it there and stood in front of it and saw something it was a bird and it was gigantic so he got his phone and stayed in front of it but as he was getting his phone the bird pushed the button that started the shrink ray and it blasted right at him and he shrank to the size of a worm. Josh saw a hawk and it flew at him and he fell and passed out.  But then he woke up but a tree branch hit him and he passed out again.
Middle 
When Josh woke up he was in the hands of a hawk and the hawk had something on his beak  and he  tried to figure out what it was but the hawk looked down at him and Josh  pretended to be asleep so the hawk looked away and dropped Josh in a cage. Josh is confused so he said why am I in here and the hawk looked at him and Josh saw what was on the hawk’s beak and Josh said hey that’s my translation machine! The hawk said and those are my eggs that you are eating for dinner and Josh said I don’t know why I am  here and the hawk said because you stole my eggs! The hawk thought Josh had gone crazy but he carried on talking. Josh wanted to say hey my invention actually works but he didn’t.
End
Josh said I didn’t know that I wasn’t allowed to take them so said fine I will do anything just let me out and the hawk said okay go and steal another hawks egg and bring it to me Josh thought that the hawk was a monster but he did it and got to go home so he said thank you and the hawk said no thank you you are a hero so Josh just smiled and went but came back after a minute he came back and said I didn’t get your name and the hawk said its but as he was saying that he woke up and never ever stole eggs from nests again and this time he is having toast for dinner,

 

the beach gaming.

We are describing this  picture.

In the morning mum said that we were going to a place where we can play and she said there is  suprises over there  and it made us all want to go there faster even dad was excited until mum said that it was only for kids I think that we all thought that that was a little bit awkward  and i said to my sister I said do you think that is a little bit awkward and she said are you kidding me that was the most awkward thing I have ever seen and we both giggled quietly but mum saw us and said why are you guys laughing and we whispered and said  to mum that was so awkward and she laughed to loud that dad could hear her and looked sad and I felt bad for him so I said that it is ok we can share the surprise.
Middle 
Mum said go pack your bags we are leaving soon and we went upstairs to pack our bags. These are the things that we packed blankets,pillows,me and Gene and I packed our squish mallows,snacks and food lots and lots of food so mum set the car and we went. When we got there the place was so warm and Gene said it’s like the most warm beach in the world and mum laughed there is a beach and we were so excited the beach was filled with games there was even a diving. Mum said welcome to the surprise. Gene and I looked at each other and ran to the bathrooms and changed into our togs. 
End
We were so happy and the best thing was that the water was only a little bit cold and if we got a little bit cold we could get in the water and just stay there if we got cold.  Mum looked at dad and said ok fine you can go and he was so happy and I was happy to we played throwing games, swimming games and diving games ew were all happy but I said to mum wait where are we going to sleep and then she showed us and it was a cabana me and Gene  were so happy and we had the most amazing time. I actually think that we should go there again and this time I want dad to take us.

About Me

Hi my name is Faith. I  am 8 years old and my favourite colour is teal. I play sports and my  food is burger king. My friends are Nuku,Victory,Emilee,Nerissa,caylee and Giorgia.when I grow up I want to be a Teacher or an optometrist. I have 3 sisters and one brother. I am Tongan and Maori.my favourite subject in school is maths. Thank you for reading please leave a comment.