the hawk and the boy.

We are learning to write a story with a beginning, middle and end. 

What happened to this lego man?

Who is he?

How did he get here? 

Who put him there? 

What is he doing here? 

How might he get out?

Beginning 
It was a quiet night and Josh wondered why is it  so quiet but then  he fell into a deep sleep and had a dream and it started like this   one day there was a man called Josh and he went to get some eggs from a nest then one day he went to get more eggs for his family dinner. He was like the rest of his family but there was only one thing that wasn’t the same. He was an inventor and he made a shrink ray and when he came  back from catching eggs he saw his shrink ray out side and he thought to himself maybe my family put it there and stood in front of it and saw something it was a bird and it was gigantic so he got his phone and stayed in front of it but as he was getting his phone the bird pushed the button that started the shrink ray and it blasted right at him and he shrank to the size of a worm. Josh saw a hawk and it flew at him and he fell and passed out.  But then he woke up but a tree branch hit him and he passed out again.
Middle 
When Josh woke up he was in the hands of a hawk and the hawk had something on his beak  and he  tried to figure out what it was but the hawk looked down at him and Josh  pretended to be asleep so the hawk looked away and dropped Josh in a cage. Josh is confused so he said why am I in here and the hawk looked at him and Josh saw what was on the hawk’s beak and Josh said hey that’s my translation machine! The hawk said and those are my eggs that you are eating for dinner and Josh said I don’t know why I am  here and the hawk said because you stole my eggs! The hawk thought Josh had gone crazy but he carried on talking. Josh wanted to say hey my invention actually works but he didn’t.
End
Josh said I didn’t know that I wasn’t allowed to take them so said fine I will do anything just let me out and the hawk said okay go and steal another hawks egg and bring it to me Josh thought that the hawk was a monster but he did it and got to go home so he said thank you and the hawk said no thank you you are a hero so Josh just smiled and went but came back after a minute he came back and said I didn’t get your name and the hawk said its but as he was saying that he woke up and never ever stole eggs from nests again and this time he is having toast for dinner,

 

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